Teaser Tuesday–A bad trade

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Mar 9, 2010 Under writing

So, this comes just a short bit after the last Teaser, after Kaylin spends spends a little time in the room with Jones, the guy with the goods. Rough draft alert!

I float out of the room a short while later—minutes? Hours? I have no clue. I’m glowing, glowing. My fingers skim the walls, graze the nubby texture, the air. I laugh and the sound floats around me, hovers. I’ve got more energy than I can fucking stand. I feel like I could explode out of my own skin, race a few hundred laps around the neighborhood, and not even have to stop for air. But most of all, I feel like I’m going to burst if I don’t find someone to talk to. I need people around me.

I take another step and stumble. Underneath my buzz, something slinks into my consciousness, something dark and dirty.

I brush my fingers against my lips, brush away the taste. Then shake my head. My hair whips at warp speed and I see black dots and lights. I welcome the distraction and do it again. And again.
Then I stumble out toward the comforting chaos of the party.

The laughter, the voices—they cover me like warm fog, fill every corner of my brain. I shove my way into the first group of people I see, just craving that feeling of connection. Shane’s telling some story about a practical joke they played on their coach, and I start laughing hysterically. The sound roars around me. Musical. Free.

Shane grins and ruffles my hair. “Gee, I wonder what you’ve been doing? I can’t believe anyone ever thought you were such a goody-goody. Slacker.”

The feel of his fingers in my hair reminds me of the room. Of other fingers gripping my hair tightly. Thankfully, though, the thought evaporates almost before it registers. I launch into babble-mode, bouncing on my heels all the while. Loving the feel of the overhead lights dancing across my skin. Life is so full of cracking energy, amazing. It can’t get any better than this.

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Teaser Tuesday–more experimenting with first person present

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Feb 9, 2010 Under writing

Since I’ve skipped the past few Teasers, I decided I’d better post something today, even though I’m not really sure what that something is yet. It’s a bit of YA first person present I’ve been tinkering with. I sent some out to crit group this week (meep!) so I figured, what the heck? Maybe I’d be brave and post a snip on here, too! (double meep!)

Comments welcome, as always!

When I walk down the stairs, Mom’s smile is the same one she’s been wearing for the past four months—perky, wide. Strained.

Then she gives me a once over, and the smile fades. It’s not long before she’s hovering, which makes even our condo-sized kitchen feel claustrophobic, and I can see her biting her lip. She’s trying not to say anything about my new look. But I know her. Former Miss Chester County won’t be able to help herself.

Sure enough, one last graze of lasered-white teeth against perfectly applied Chanel lip-color later, she says, “Hon, are you sure that’s what you want to wear on your first day of school?”

I look down. I’m wearing a frayed t-shirt, an old pair of jeans that had probably worn out their coolness years ago, and a pair of scuffed up sneakers. Not as awful as I’d like, to be honest. I completely procrastinated on my mission to stock up on school clothes at the local discount store. But my blond hair is pulled back into a haphazard braid that makes me look about twelve, and instead of contacts, I’m wearing my ancient square glasses—the ones my brother used to tease me were only fit for one-hundred year old librarians. Or asexual men.

“Yes, this is exactly what I want to wear.”

Mom opens her mouth as if to protest, but appears to think the better of it. “Okay, hon. Just remember, everything will be fine.” She’s using that soft, soothing voice I hate, the one that says she thinks I’m a wild, injured animal that needs to be approached with extra care. And I know she’s not finished; we’ve been here before. Soothing voice is always followed by some false platitude about how I’m really such a nice girl.

Wait for it. Wait for it. “You’re a good person—whether you believe it or not.”

But she can’t hold my gaze when she says it, she never can; instead, she turns to fuss with the already perfect place setting.

We both know she’s lying.

I don’t reply, but my silence speaks volumes. I grab a single piece of toast off a plate groaning with pancakes, eggs, the works. Because it’s a universal mom fact that food will solve everything that’s wrong in the world. I sling my backpack over my shoulder.

“You have to eat more than that before your first day,” she frets.

“I’ll be fine. Thanks though,” I add, leaning down to give her a peck on the cheek. After all, it’s not her fault. “Besides, I need to get going if I’m going to walk.”

Mom frowns. “I still don’t know why you’re planning on walking. You have a perfectly good car.”

Too good—that was the problem. I didn’t want to show up for the first day at my new school in a Lexus convertible. “Haven’t you heard? Exercise is good for you.”

“Funny.”

I try to smile, but my mouth fumbles over how to form one. It feels like decades have passed since I’ve activated those particular muscles. In reality, it’s only been a few months. “See ya later.”

Then, I walk out the door to start the mile hike to school. This year will be different. It has to be.

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Trying something new and probably failing miserably Teaser

Posted by houndrat on Monday Jan 18, 2010 Under writing

So, as I head down the homestretch on Demon Gaurd revisions, I decided to post something new for a change. This is a random snip from a story that doesn’t have much of a plot yet. Or any plot at all, really. It’s also totally different than anything I’ve written before.

Comments appreciated, as always! :D

I walk through campus and take in all the buildings, the quad, the school I’ve attended for the past three years. My eyes seek a tangible clue, a scrap of evidence that things have changed.

But I find…nothing. The familiar stucco walls are still the color of butterscotch, the grass in the senior courtyard the same vibrant shade of green. Even the old oak sprawling proudly through the middle of campus appears to have the same number of leaves. The kids laughing and gossiping their way past me in huddles are talking about the same meaningless topics as always…parties, dates, homework.

I turn to cut through the corridor toward homeroom, when I spot him.

James.

My heart slams to a halt in my chest. Then, it kick-starts into an unsteady gait, like an athlete’s first limping step after an injury.

As I watch him lean into a curvy dark-haired girl, his arm loosely draped across her shoulders, I finally pinpoint what’s different. It’s not the school, or the students, or anything that I can touch. It’s my hold on James. Always tenuous at best, my slippery claim to him has faded along with the intensity of the summer sun.

I’d give just about anything to change that.

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Demon Guard Teaser: When a Kiss Goes Wrong

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Jan 12, 2010 Under writing

Another Teaser from Demon Guard, because, hey–what else to I work on these days? But I finally have a FINISHED ROUGH DRAFT—WOOT!

Anyway–this scene comes in pretty close to the story’s climax. Shade just found Summer talking to Cody in a deserted hallway during the school dance. The boy clearly isn’t in good shape, not at all, and he’s wanting to know if there’s something going on between our heroine and another guy. Here goes:

My heart broke at his defeated tone. I couldn’t help it; I caved. “No, Cody and I aren’t an item. I was just…well, never mind that. I don’t understand, though—why does it matter to you?”

But deep down, I knew why it mattered. I didn’t need his relieved sigh to tell me, or the feathery stroke of his hand against my hair. “Why do you think, Summer?”

And then he was crushing me to him. There was no gentleness in this kiss, but none of the rage from a moment ago, either. It was pure hunger, sucking me down into a whirlwind of need. He bunched his hands in my hair and smashed me back against the wall. My arms snaked around his neck, urging him closer, closer. I couldn’t get close enough as the heat of his skin burned into mine, searing me with delicious warmth. I never wanted it to end. I craved…more. Wanted…everything.

Until Shade started shuddering. Violently.

My head rattled, and the rough stone cut sharply into my scalp and bare back. I twisted out from under him. “Shade? What’s wrong?”

He stared right through me for a moment, like he couldn’t see me at all, his entire body still lurching with spasms. Then he shook his head. Sweat droplets littered the air around us. “I don’t…I’m not sure. I haven’t felt right since I went off the meds. And I meant to tell you this sooner, but Summer—I think there’s something really wrong with me. I’m remembering things…I can’t possibly be remembering.” Another convulsion wracked his frame. He threw one forearm against the wall and buried his face against it, as if to ride out the storm pummeling him.

Cautiously, I laid my hand on his shoulder. “What do you mean? What kinds of things?”

He raised his head, and I sucked in my breath. A lifetime of agony etched itself onto his sweat-drenched features. “Horrible…horrible things,” he whispered. “I don’t know…I can’t…I don’t want you to hate me.”

“Hate you for what?”

“For—Goddammit! Can’t you smell that?” Suddenly, he burst away from the wall, his eyes blazing once more with rage.

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Demon Guard Teaser!

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Jan 5, 2010 Under writing

In case anyone is wondering what DG is about, a fellow crit group member (the amazing Amy Bai) summed it up as Mean Girls meet Harry Potter. That totally works for me–although, I could also go with Veronica Mars meet Something-Vampire-Academy-esque-But-Without-the-Vampires. Um, yeah. Maybe I should stick with my crit partner’s version.

At any rate, this Teaser follows shortly after the one a few weeks ago, where the MC Summer discovers that a lewd photo of her and Billy, a guy she despises, was photo-shopped and sent around the school. This is Billy catching up with her afterwards. Oh, and, if this is your first time–the MC has been hearing voices for a few days now. As usual, all comments welcomed and appreciated!

“So, how’d you like the photo?” he said, his too-slick smile making him look like a used-car salesman. Only—used-car salesmen didn’t usually leer at their customers. His gaze traveled down my body in a way that made my hands twitch to cover myself.

I shook off the sudden urge to dart back into the bathroom and lifted my chin instead. “Honestly? It made me want to hurl.”

He stepped closer, trapping me in the corner next to the bathroom door. Warning bells rang in my head. I pressed myself tightly against the rough wall to keep any part of my body from touching him.

“That’s too bad,” he whispered, “Because I was thinking—since everyone already thinks we, you know, got naked together, what’s the harm in doing it for real?” He reached out and twined a strand of my hair around his fingers.

“You—” Too late, I made a move to knee him in the balls. He yanked the hair tighter, and his other hand flew up to dig into my throat, holding me prisoner in the corner. My scalp burned. I wanted to shout for help, but I couldn’t. I couldn’t do anything but try to breathe—and even that wasn’t going so well.

“Ah, ah, ah. Don’t make any hasty decisions. You know, I’m not really into hume-lovers, but I’d make an exception for you,” he said, wafting his bitter coffee breath into my face.

He leaned harder on my throat and I wheezed, my lungs straining for even a thin trickle of oxygen. His mouth moved closer, closer. I tried to twist my head away, but the hand with the hair grabbed my chin, wrenching it forward to face him. My fingers flew up to pry at his. It was like clawing against stone. Not strong enough. No…air. Dizzy, I squeezed my eyes shut and prepared to bite. And then a familiar drawl sounded from behind us.

“Let her go right now, or I’m going to turn your face into something that really makes the girls scream. And not in a good way.”

The grip on my neck tightened at first, then slowly released. I gasped, my lungs on fire. I was still sucking down greedy mouthfuls of air when Billy turned to face Shade.

“Hey, there, buddy. There’s no reason for you to get involved. I was just having a little fun.”

Shade’s focus shifted to me, to where my hands still clutched my throat. His eyes flashed. Somehow, I could read the violent intention in them, clear as day. Or maybe it was the word whispering through my head. One word, coated in blazing hot fury.

Kill.

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Teaser Tuesday: things you never want to see on your cell phone.

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Dec 1, 2009 Under writing

Here’s a scene I worked on in Friday Night Writes with my AW peeps awhile back.  Still needs some finessing, but I think it’s kind of fun.  Hope you enjoy!   :)

 

       The second I set foot inside the cafeteria the next morning, I could feel the tension crackling in the air.  The buzz and whispers were back—and with tsunami-like force.  

            I paused, inhaling slowly and forcing a smile.  Maybe it was just my nerves.  After all, they were understandably twitchy from my scheduled B&E debut later today.  But then my gaze caught on a nearby table. The cluster of girls sitting there glanced up at me before consulting their cell phones and dissolving into fits of giggles.  Great. Something was definitely up, and whatever it was?  Not really doing much to xanax my whole jittery thing.

            I stalked over to where Cody was slamming his own cell phone shut and flung my backpack on the table.  “Let’s see it,” I said, thrusting out my hand.

            He tried to push the phone into his pocket, but I grabbed his wrist. His cheeks flamed; he looked like a kid who’d just been caught reading porn by his mom.  “Look, why don’t you just let this go?” he said.  “I think you’ll feel better if—Hey!”

            I wrestled the phone out of his grasp and flipped it on.  “Give me a break.  I’m going to see whatever’s making everyone act all freaky sooner or later.  Let’s just get it over with.”

            He hesitated with his hand hovering over mine, but one look into my determined eyes and he caved.  “Fine.  But don’t say I didn’t warn you.  Here.”  He pressed a few buttons.  Seconds later, a photo popped up. 

            The identity of the couple on the tiny screen didn’t register right away—only that the girl’s skirt was pushed up to her waist while her bare legs were wrapped around a guy’s back.  A naked guy.  “What the heck…?” It was then I started noticing the details.  The silver go-go boots, the white tube top.  The red hair.

            My mouth gaped open, and my heart froze in my chest. Holy shit—it was porn. Only somehow, I was the freaking star.

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Cut parking lot scene from Demon Guard

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Nov 24, 2009 Under writing

Okay, so today I’m posting a cut scene from Demon Guard.  I actually ended up going in a whole different direction with the plot.  I hadn’t even remembered it until about two hours ago, when I dug it up in all it’s unedited glory.  I did spend some time trying to revise it a bit– because, hey, how else was I going to procrastinate working on REAL scenes?–but it’s still mighty rough-ish.  Maybe I can find a home for it in my sequel. *snicker*  Hey, a girl can dream, right? 

Anyway, here’s the set-up.  Summer (the MC’s) old friends Kat and Allie go to spike demons in a parking lot to join the Academy, only–they’re not the meek little Stage Ones they’re supposed to be.  Rather, it’s an ambush, with three fully embodied demons waiting to attack.  Kat and Allie are captured.  Summer and her friends Cody and Shade try to fend them off and save the girls, but will their efforts be enough?  Read on:

 

When I was only a few feet away, I tossed my spike to Cody, who immediately feinted left.  The demon followed the spike with hate-filled eyes.

It was all the opportunity I needed.  I launched forward, whipping my leg around when I got within striking distance to do a foot sweep.  Whack!  I caught the demon above the ankle, with just enough force to make him stumble.  As he toppled forward, his grip on Kat loosened, and Cody jumped him from behind.  The spike glinted in the sun as it arched to pierce the demon’s skull.  His scream rent the air while he tumbled to gritty asphalt, Cody clinging to his back, Kat crashing down beside them.  I rolled and grabbed her around the waist, hoisting us both to our feet so we could leap back and out of danger.

Several yards away, Shade wrestled the lone demon into a headlock. His spike flashed.  Then, he hefted up the demon and tossed it good twenty feet across the parking lot.  I felt my jaw go slack. What the hell?  But I didn’t have time to ponder that physical impossibility.  We had a third demon to take down. 

The remaining demon’s brawny arm still circled Allie’s neck, her feet dangling a foot off the ground. Her ragged gasps for air grew weaker. I raced toward her and, out of the corner of my eye, saw Shade do the same.  But even though I was sprinting, I felt like I was moving in slow motion. Like I was trying to force my way through hip-deep sand.  My heart thumped in time with my footsteps as I struggled to reach her in time. 

The demon gripped Allie on one side of her chin. Metallic fear coated my mouth while a scream of terror echoed through the parking lot. 

Mine.  

Allie’s tear-filled eyes pleaded with me.  My body responded, and a new burst of strength powered me forward. But I was too far.  Too late. Helpless to do anything other than watch.

A quick jerk of the demon’s wrist.  A crunch of snapping neck .  “NOOOO!”  The tortured howl burst from somewhere deep within me.   Allie’s eyes flickered once, twice—and then their light dimmed to a sightless stare.  Seconds later, her limp body slumped in a heap at the demon’s feet. 

            Everything after that was a blur.  I dove for Allie’s body while Shade tackled the last demon.  I shook her, laying my head over her chest to see if any air was going in.  Nothing.  Utter stillness.  Tears filled my eyes, even though I’d known before I checked it was futile. 

People with broken necks didn’t breathe.

            As I laid there with my cheek still pressed to her chest, the warmth of her body felt both familiar and cruel.  I caught Kat’s horrified gaze from across the lot.  Fuzzy little black dots danced in front of her face.  I prayed for darkness to take me, to give me a brief respite from the pain crushing my heart.  But fate had no such kindness in store.  Though the parking lot wavered like a mirage, it never disappeared entirely.

Neither did the body of the dead friend cradled in my arms.

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Late night scene from trunked novel: Tainted

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Oct 6, 2009 Under writing

I’m doing another Teaser Tuesday today! (Okay, if you must know–it’s still Monday in West Coast time. But, hey, for most of you it’s already Tuesday–that counts for something, right?)  This scene features one of my favorite characters from my trunked novel Tainted:  Justin.

Set-up:  The MC is trying to recover from a karaoke fiasco a few nights ago, where she inadvertently tapped into her growing powers to enthrall the frat boys into love zombies while singing.  Most of the effect has worn off, except for the random guys still knocking at her door late at night, declaring their love for her.  Justin is a sort of mysterious character, a guy with strong mental powers, who seems a little odd and has questionable motives.  He’s an old acquaintance/friend of the love interest, the MC’s Protector Logan.  Beyond that, the MC doesn’t know much about him.  In this scene he just randomly shows up for a visit in the middle of the night.

 

By the time the third night after the karaoke-debacle rolled around, I was done.  At the first crack of a fist on my door, I staggered out of bed and stumbled to switch on my desk lamp, squinting into the harsh light.  Whoever was out there was about to get a lesson in the principles of harmonious dorm living.  Rule number one being:  if you pounded on my door after midnight, I had free rein to kick your ass.

Whatever loitering moron awaited would be un-enthralled tonight, if I had to cut off his head to do it.  Between the enthrall-ees and the nightmares, sleep was becoming a distant memory.  Really not okay.

          I stalked toward the door, the icy wooden floor pulsing goosebumps up my legs.  I was about three feet away when I heard an unexpected noise:  the lock clicking.  A millisecond later, the door burst wide open.  I shrieked and jumped back, grabbing a hair brush off my dresser for protection.

And then my grasp on the hairbrush loosened when I saw who it was.  Justin.  Leaning casually against the door frame, like nothing was amiss.

“What, is there a sign out there that says AM-PM market or something?  Believe it or not, I am not open all night for business.  And I so did not just say that,” I moaned.  It wasn’t my fault, though.  Who expected anyone to function at their finest at—I glanced at the mocking digital glow from my dresser—1:23 a.m?  It was bad enough that the love zombies kept knocking after midnight.  Now I had to deal with a strange and possibly half-crazy Gifted guy as well?  

 I whirled around and stomped back to bed, plunking myself down before glaring over at him.  I chucked the hairbrush at my dresser with a satisfying crack.  “Look, I don’t know on which planet you learned proper etiquette, but here on Earth, we like to wait for people to actually answer the door.  You know, before we just go ahead and burst in using our special Gifts.  And what the hell am I saying?”  Argh.  I desperately needed sleep.  Was that really too much to ask?

Apparently so, because Justin strolled into my room, as though 1:00 am was a perfectly acceptable time for a social call.  “Sorry—I was afraid you wouldn’t answer.”  He pivoted my desk chair around and straddled it with annoying grace, crossing his arms over the top and resting his chin on his fist.

 “Yes, and there would have been a good reason for that.  I.  Was.  Sleeping!” I said.

 I didn’t know if it was lack of sleep, cheap dorm light bulbs, or some whacked out magic that lit his sardonic blue gaze with a suddenly appealing gleam. “Well, see?  That’s why I went ahead and opened it.”

“OH!”  Something was whacked, all right—him.  I clapped my hands to my cheeks and squeezed my eyes shut.  “I give up,” I finally said.  “Please, just tell me why you’re here, so I can go back to sleep. Sooner versus later would be nice.”  I sagged back against the wall and hugged my knees to my chest, reaching down to pull the snugly comforter over my frigid toes.

“Okay,” he said calmly, obviously not perturbed in the slightest by my outburst.  “I was just thinking—since you spend so much time training with Logan, it puts him at a  bit of an unfair advantage.  So I thought I’d remedy that by coming by.”

I eyed my warm pillow with wanton longing before turning to address him.  “Huh?  What are you talking about?  What unfair advantage?”  And then it hit me—why was I even trying to have a logical conversation here?  The guy was an absolute loon.  “Oh my God, did you really come here in the middle of the night just to start spouting crazy?  Because, sorry, my mind only comprehends loony rants after nine o’ clock a.m. and about three cups of coffee.”

His forehead creased. “I’m not spouting crazy.  I’m talking about the possibility of our futures being linked.”

Loon or not, he had my attention now.  Unfortunately.  My mouth gaped open and I blinked several times. “Say what?”

“Logan hasn’t told you anything?”  He seemed perplexed, which was odd for Justin.  Usually his repertoire of emotions ranged from “bored” to “slightly less bored”.  Not that I knew for sure—I couldn’t read him at all, and quite frankly, I was okay with that.  There was no telling what insanity was going on in his pretty but demented head at any given time.

“Um,” I said, “if by anything you mean linked futures and unfair advantages, apparently not.”  And it still sounded like crazy spoutage to me.

 

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Teaser Tuesday–random excerpt from unwritten story

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Sep 1, 2009 Under writing

I was cleaning up some files on my computer a few weeks ago, and stumbled upon this totally random excerpt from a story I think I started months ago, just prior to settling down to write The Demon Guard.  I only have one chapter of it, which is written from 4 different POVs, all in third person.  Crazy for me, I know.  Anyway, just to take a little break from the Demon Guard, I thought I’d post it.  It’s raw and barely edited, and sadly, has nary a word of snark to be seen!  :)

            Dr. Balthrop walked into the dim room, eager to finish up with his last patient of the day.  His raise had been approved, and he couldn’t wait to get home and tell his wife they could finally afford that beach house she’d been bitching about for years.  Who knows–maybe he’d finally get to watch an entire football game in peace.

            He plunked down on the stool and scooted toward the metal bed, shivering at the chill.  For reasons unknown to him, the rooms were all kept at a brisk 62 degrees.  Seemed like an odd temperature for hospitalized patients.  Then again, there was nothing normal about this entire set-up.

After a brief glance at the monitors, he focused on the pale face of girl.  She looked like she was made from porcelain, skin velvety smooth yet hard underneath.  Long black eyelashes fanned the tops of her cheeks.  He estimated her age at about nineteen, maybe twenty, because they didn’t give him information like that in the chart.

“How are we doing today, Skye?”  He didn’t expect an answer.  The prescriptions pumping through this one were enough to fell an elephant.  The gleam of silver metal encasing her wrists caught his eye, and he shivered again.  He wondered briefly why such a fragile wisp of a girl needed so many drugs, and better yet, the rationale behind the steel handcuffs chaining her to the bed, but then stopped abruptly.  His employers didn’t pay him to wonder.  She was just another of the many Jane Does his employers had stockpiled in this lab in the middle of nowhere, all hooked up to monitors.  All sleeping, so to speak.

            He jotted down a few notes on her vitals, then quickly rose to his feet.  He couldn’t wait to escape this Godforsaken place every night.  If the money wasn’t so good….

He’d already taken a step toward the door when he heard it. 

  Beep. Beep. Beep.

  He froze, his gaze jerking up toward the monitor.  Sure enough, the little red heart was blipping faster.  Her pulse had sped up.  Significantly.

            “What the—?” 

            The crack of splintering metal barely registered before a steel grip dug into his shoulder.

            Through the shrieking pain in his joint, he thought, this couldn’t be happening.  There’s no way she could have woken up.  But he knew, without a doubt, there was only one other person in the room.

            Clenching his teeth to keep from crying out, he pivoted to meet the gray-black gaze of his patient.

            Dark hair dangled limply across her face, but she made no move to push it aside.  Instead, she dissected him with unnatural eyes before speaking.  “Who am I?” Her voice sounded like a nail scratching against an emery board.

            “You…you don’t know?” He managed to choke out.  And then it hit him. “Wait a second—you can talk?”

            Slowly, she tilted her head to the side.  “Who am I?” she repeated softly, while her fingers squeezed harder.  Seconds later he felt an unbearable pressure build in his shoulder, just before the ligaments began to tear.

            Fire ripped through his arm. “Sk-Skye,” he gasped.  “Your name’s Skye.”

            The pressure let up while she considered his response.  Just before her eyes darkened to slate.  Ice slithered across his back; they were the cold, flat eyes of a predator.  “You lie.”

            A sudden blur, and then a sharp pain exploded in the side of his neck.  Before he could open his mouth to scream, the room went black.

            ***

            The man jerked awake in his car when the alarms shrilled, piercing the night air like a bomb.  From the darkness of his car, he peered across the street at the nondescript building, located in-between two more nondescript buildings just like it.  The abandoned warehouse district–what a place to hang out every night.  Nothing ever happened here.  And yet….His hand hovered over his cell phone while he waited for evidence that something was amiss. 

Seconds later, his proof arrived.  He almost pissed his pants when the lone figure darted out into the street.  No friggin’ way.  It wasn’t possible.

He blinked to clear his sleep-crusted eyes, thinking he was hallucinating. Maybe it was time to cut back on the weekend weed.  But when the petite figure took off with the swiftness and grace of a cheetah, he cranked the ignition and jammed the car into gear, hitting speed dial on the phone.

It was answered on the first ring.  “Yes? This had better be good.”

“She’s escaped.”

A harshly indrawn breath sounded from the other line.  “Then follow her.  And you’d better not be messing with me.”

“No, sir—no messing. And I’m on it.”  He tossed the phone down and concentrated on following the girl, who’d just darted down an alley.  The sound of screeching tires in the background told him they wouldn’t be alone for long.

 

 

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Teaser Tuesday–Demon Guard

Posted by houndrat on Tuesday Aug 18, 2009 Under writing

Just posting a random scene from somewhere mid-story.  Shade is a guy Summer hooked up with once, about a year ago.  Lots of baggage there.  And Summer just got Headmistress Scruggs’ permission to visit her mom in the hospital on a weekday, with a catch–she has to carpool with Shade (whose mom is also in the hospital).

Like the rest of this, it’s still rough–I”m happy for any suggestions to make it better! Thanks for reading!

 

After class, I headed outside to find Shade.  He was in his usual spot, sprawled across one of the lunch tables like he owned it.  I paused next to his feet.  With his sunglasses on, I couldn’t tell if he was awake or not, but his relaxed mouth suggested he didn’t have a care in the world.  Must be nice.  

          Jackass.

          A breeze ruffled his hair just then, the sun brightening the blond strands into shimmering threads of gold.  The second I realized where my thoughts had taken me, I cursed myself.   No way would I fall into that trap again.  Then I shoved his leg.  Hard.

          “What the…?  Oh.  It’s you.”  He reared up on his elbows.  “Did you need something?  Or did you wake me just to be annoying?”

          I crossed my arms and offered him my best phony smile.  “Both.  Actually, I come bearing messages from Scruggs.  Do you want the good news or the bad news first?”

          “Is there an option c that says ‘neither’?”

          “No.”

          “Fine.  Give me the good.”

          “She says you can go visit your mom today,” I said.

          “Hmm.  Bad?”

          Renewed hostility at Scruggs stupid edict had my fingers digging into my ribs.  “We have to ride together.”

          “Wow.  You keep finding excuses to get us together, and I’m going to start thinking you have a crush.”

          The dark lenses of his sunglasses still shielded his eyes, but I could see his mouth curving up into an annoying smirk.  I stuffed the urge to chuck my backpack at his head.  Barely. 

          He was quiet for a moment, then shrugged.  “Okay. Whatever.  But I’m driving.”

          I bristled at his cocky assumption.  “Why?  I’m a good driver.”

          He laid back down, folding his arms behind his head.  “Don’t freak.  I’m sure your driving skills are adequate.  You car, alas, is not.  I mean, why travel economy when you can go luxury?”

          Heat stung my cheeks.  I’d had a nice car—once.  But after my dad lost his primo Council job, we’d had to trade my sporty little Mustang for a more affordable, eight-year old Sentra.   And last time I’d checked, Shade had an awesome Porsche.  I forced down my anger while I considered my options.  I suppose he had a point.  Besides, if he drove, I could work on my laptop on the way.

          “Fine,” I bit out.  “I’ll meet you by the front door.  Three-thirty work for you?”

          “It’s a date,” he drawled.

          I rolled my eyes and walked over to Cody’s table.

 

 

 

 

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