Comments on: Teaser Tuesday–Family Matters

By: T.H. Mafi

T.H. Mafi — Thu, 29 Apr 2010 21:43:30 +0000

beautiful, deb. really, really fantastic.

my down comforter doesn’t give a damn, either.

oh your WORDS.

love it.

<3333

By: Ink

Ink — Thu, 29 Apr 2010 20:56:20 +0000

I love the detail about facades and shedding her skin when she’s alone. That was so believably done, and the voice is perfect, as always

By: angie

angie — Thu, 29 Apr 2010 00:13:40 +0000

Love it! the voice is awesome and so believable. I love the family motto thing, really rang a bell with me. Can’t wait for more.

By: Liz Page

Liz Page — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 22:45:06 +0000

You know I’m just in love with this story right? I’m totally down to beta when you finish it.
As for that er…lovely…paper, you can totally have it. It’s a pretty bad wreck lol. I literally can’t think of a single other way to phrase ‘PTSD and Iraq veterans’ that will get me some previous studies! Good luck with the research. Let me know how it turns out!

By: Cory

Cory — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 19:11:32 +0000

Love this, Deb “Relief strips the tightness from my chest.” And that last paragraph is gold.

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 02:59:27 +0000

Kick ass teaser, Deb. Very tense scene.

By: bethany

bethany — Wed, 28 Apr 2010 00:03:40 +0000

you just wrote this? It flows so well, and has such depth…great teaser!

By: Laurie

Laurie — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 22:29:27 +0000

Internal thought is beautiful. I SO want to know what her deal is.

By: Sage

Sage — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 22:06:10 +0000

This is a great snippet. Love the emotions. They’re so real

By: Annie

Annie — Tue, 27 Apr 2010 19:47:19 +0000

The emotions are so real! Looks like its going tobe another great one!