Comments on: Teaser Tuesday–A bad trade

By: Annie

Annie — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 21:16:20 +0000

WOW! Me hearts dark and edgy YA and you’re nailing it!! Keep up the awesome work!

By: Jennifer (Herb)

Jennifer (Herb) — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 19:59:03 +0000

Great voice, Deb. I can’t wait to read more!

By: JennW

JennW — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 13:22:33 +0000

Wow, this is really good! And does not read like first draft at all. You’ve set a great scene here and nice voice. I like your present tense, it really works with this!

By: Niyrak

Niyrak — Wed, 10 Mar 2010 11:51:10 +0000

Nice job! I like how you pull her from the memory of what she has done to get what she wanted. It paints a clear picture for the reader.

By: T.H. Mafi

T.H. Mafi — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 22:06:57 +0000

wow this was really awesome! great job!

(also, please whisper amy’s name a little louder on my blog. i want to make sure she hears you!)

thanks for the tease!!

best of luck

By: Karla Nellenbach

Karla Nellenbach — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 21:09:03 +0000

Color me SOOOOO jealous. This is seriously great! More please! Now! ….er, please

By: Lyn

Lyn — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 18:04:00 +0000

Love the MC’s voice and the descriptions. It feels like I’m there.

By: ChristaCarol

ChristaCarol — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 17:41:35 +0000

Loving this darkness and her buzz filtering out what happened in the room. Good stuff, lady.

By: Laurie

Laurie — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 16:29:24 +0000

Love the voice. It’s SO dark!

By: Liz Page

Liz Page — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 16:23:49 +0000

Eek I love this so much. The descriptions are incredible. I totally feel her trip/buzz.