Comments on: Demon Guard Teaser: When a Kiss Goes Wrong

By: Karla

Karla — Tue, 19 Jan 2010 09:50:18 +0000

Oh wow! This was definitely cute and sweet in the beginning then it became all intense! Awesome job!

By: Christine FOnseca

Christine FOnseca — Sat, 16 Jan 2010 20:24:59 +0000

Nice job!

By: Niyrak

Niyrak — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 11:33:58 +0000

ooo I gotta know what he did that would make her hate him… you did a good jub setting us up for something BIG…

By: Hannah

Hannah — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 02:57:04 +0000

Loved this!!

By: Dystophil

Dystophil — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 00:47:45 +0000

Great teaser, can’t wait to read more. It definitely keeps you guessing and I liked the slightly creepy angle it takes. More please

By: K.A. Stewart

K.A. Stewart — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 00:16:58 +0000

Nice! I think I’m gonna have to go back and check out the teasers I’ve missed on this one.

By: Paranormalchick

Paranormalchick — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 23:41:46 +0000

Oh.My.GOD!!! WHat the hell?!?! You left me hanging! Cruel, very cruel. LOL LOVED IT! I have to know what’s going on here! GREAT job! *High fives my demon sister*

By: Vero

Vero — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 23:19:11 +0000

Shade!!!! That kiss was so hot and it just made the next part so much more powerful! I read this when you were working on it in FNW and the second ime around it is just as powerful as the first time! Very. nicely. done.

By: ChristaCarol

ChristaCarol — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 19:59:59 +0000

This is awesome, and I want more of Shade. Your descriptions of what he’s going through are right on. Great job!

By: Cory

Cory — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 19:21:53 +0000

Very hot kiss! Congrats on finishing the rough draft. That’s a huge accomplishment!