Comments on: Locker scene–Demon Guard http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/ Finding Time to Write with 3 Dogs, 2 Kids & an ADHD Husband. Mon, 06 Sep 2010 20:05:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: ABKN http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1254 ABKN Wed, 16 Sep 2009 16:47:07 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1254 Silver lockers work. Was there anyone else walking the hall? Can you hear your footsteps echo off the concrete walls? Are the walls concrete? You know, paint the picture for me, and this would totally rock! Silver lockers work. Was there anyone else walking the hall? Can you hear your footsteps echo off the concrete walls? Are the walls concrete? You know, paint the picture for me, and this would totally rock!

]]> By: K Taylor http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1251 K Taylor Wed, 16 Sep 2009 06:42:14 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1251 Ewww! Brains should not be lying around, especially in the back of lockers! Great interaction with the friend, very teen. I'm 5'2", and definitely grateful our lockers weren't so high I couldn't see in the back, lol. They've since removed them from most schools I know because of the cost of maintenance....and in nastier areas, pipe bombs. I remember making sure I didn't lose that slip with the combination those first couple weeks of school. :) Ewww! Brains should not be lying around, especially in the back of lockers!
Great interaction with the friend, very teen.
I’m 5’2″, and definitely grateful our lockers weren’t so high I couldn’t see in the back, lol. They’ve since removed them from most schools I know because of the cost of maintenance….and in nastier areas, pipe bombs. I remember making sure I didn’t lose that slip with the combination those first couple weeks of school. :)

]]> By: Annie--Paranormalchick http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1247 Annie--Paranormalchick Tue, 15 Sep 2009 23:12:39 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1247 Bawhahahaha Great snip! Very hooking :) Bawhahahaha Great snip! Very hooking :)

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1245 houndrat Tue, 15 Sep 2009 20:31:52 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1245 Well, actually, I say stainless steel. Does silver work better? i can say silver...I can, I can... :) Well, actually, I say stainless steel. Does silver work better? i can say silver…I can, I can… :)

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1244 houndrat Tue, 15 Sep 2009 20:31:14 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1244 Thanks all. I actually cut some of that out to speed up the scene, but now I see I should probably put it back in. Oh, but I do think I say the lockers are silver, so yay me! :) Thanks all. I actually cut some of that out to speed up the scene, but now I see I should probably put it back in. Oh, but I do think I say the lockers are silver, so yay me! :)

]]> By: ABKN http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1243 ABKN Tue, 15 Sep 2009 20:15:28 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1243 I ditto what Shveta said I ditto what Shveta said

]]> By: Shveta http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1242 Shveta Tue, 15 Sep 2009 20:10:58 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1242 Mmm, brains. (Wait, did I say that out loud?) In any case, I want to read more, so hurry up! *grin* A few questions: What color are the lockers? Are the hallways filled with chattering students? Does the brain smell? Mmm, brains.

(Wait, did I say that out loud?)

In any case, I want to read more, so hurry up! *grin* A few questions: What color are the lockers? Are the hallways filled with chattering students? Does the brain smell?

]]> By: ABKN http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1241 ABKN Tue, 15 Sep 2009 19:51:45 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1241 I think I want more description of the scene (the hallway, the lockers, the floor?), but other than that, I liked it. I think I want more description of the scene (the hallway, the lockers, the floor?), but other than that, I liked it.

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1239 houndrat Tue, 15 Sep 2009 18:11:24 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1239 Hey, excellent catch, Vero--I never would have noticed in a million years. Locker number fixed! :) Hey, excellent catch, Vero–I never would have noticed in a million years. Locker number fixed! :)

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/09/15/locker-scene-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1238 houndrat Tue, 15 Sep 2009 18:08:10 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=198#comment-1238 Ha--I read that line about three times and thought it sounded stiff, Bryn--thanks! Will definitely revise! Ha–I read that line about three times and thought it sounded stiff, Bryn–thanks! Will definitely revise!

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