Comments on: Teaser Tuesday–Demon Guard http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/ Finding Time to Write with 3 Dogs, 2 Kids & an ADHD Husband. Mon, 06 Sep 2010 20:05:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Krista Ashe http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1184 Krista Ashe Thu, 20 Aug 2009 15:18:52 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1184 Ooh, I love Shade....I love to hate him, lol. Loved the description in this snippet, and I wanna know more about these characters. Good job! Ooh, I love Shade….I love to hate him, lol.

Loved the description in this snippet, and I wanna know more about these characters.

Good job!

]]> By: Amna http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1183 Amna Wed, 19 Aug 2009 17:30:12 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1183 I love the voice in this! Your MC is great. Looks like a great read, look forward to having it in my hands! I love the voice in this! Your MC is great. Looks like a great read, look forward to having it in my hands!

]]> By: Tracey http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1182 Tracey Wed, 19 Aug 2009 12:27:41 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1182 Have I ever mentioned how much I love the voice in this? :-) The dialogue is great, snappy and believable. And despite your worries about descriptions, I think you do a fab job of describing Shade's personality with just the few details provided. Looking forward to reading this thing! Have I ever mentioned how much I love the voice in this? :-) The dialogue is great, snappy and believable. And despite your worries about descriptions, I think you do a fab job of describing Shade’s personality with just the few details provided. Looking forward to reading this thing!

]]> By: Sarah http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1181 Sarah Wed, 19 Aug 2009 05:38:37 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1181 Ohhh. Super snarky! Ohhh. Super snarky!

]]> By: Becca http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1180 Becca Wed, 19 Aug 2009 02:06:56 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1180 This is some seriously good writing. I loved it!! Must suck to ride with an old flame. :P I need to read more ASAP!! :D This is some seriously good writing. I loved it!! Must suck to ride with an old flame. :P I need to read more ASAP!! :D

]]> By: Kari Stewart http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1178 Kari Stewart Tue, 18 Aug 2009 23:18:49 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1178 I love the voice, love the interaction. The one thing you might want to think on is that you have a plethora of "S" names here. (Summer, Shade, Scruggs) Might cause a few trip ups for really fast readers. I love the voice, love the interaction. The one thing you might want to think on is that you have a plethora of “S” names here. (Summer, Shade, Scruggs) Might cause a few trip ups for really fast readers.

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1177 houndrat Tue, 18 Aug 2009 20:04:49 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1177 Gretchen--HA! I already had to replace "shades" with "sunglasses"--I thought Shade wearing shades was a bit much. Gretchen–HA! I already had to replace “shades” with “sunglasses”–I thought Shade wearing shades was a bit much.

]]> By: Gretchen http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1176 Gretchen Tue, 18 Aug 2009 19:25:57 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1176 Awesome. The dialogue is completely believeable and I love the voice. Definitely want to know more about Summer's situation. I'd keep turning pages! Only I didn't know any high school kids who drove Porsches. But it's been awhile since I was in high school. :) *fighting urge for 110 IN THE SHADE joke here* Awesome. The dialogue is completely believeable and I love the voice. Definitely want to know more about Summer’s situation. I’d keep turning pages!

Only I didn’t know any high school kids who drove Porsches. But it’s been awhile since I was in high school. :)

*fighting urge for 110 IN THE SHADE joke here*

]]> By: Steve http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1175 Steve Tue, 18 Aug 2009 17:38:50 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1175 I love the MC's voice as well. Good repartee. It would be cool if Summer took Shade's keys and she got in the driver's seat of the Porche. That would lead to an interesting exchange. Well done and look forward to more. I love the MC’s voice as well. Good repartee. It would be cool if Summer took Shade’s keys and she got in the driver’s seat of the Porche. That would lead to an interesting exchange. Well done and look forward to more.

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/08/18/teaser-tuesday-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1174 houndrat Tue, 18 Aug 2009 17:34:07 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=196#comment-1174 Thanks guys! I went ahead and added a "said" on that line, Bryn, to see if it helps the rest of the readers. And yeah, his mom is in the hospital, too. Sue--I don't know if I'll ever rid myself of my incessant need for adjectives and adverbs, lol. I'll definitely cut those two out--thanks! :) Thanks guys! I went ahead and added a “said” on that line, Bryn, to see if it helps the rest of the readers. And yeah, his mom is in the hospital, too. Sue–I don’t know if I’ll ever rid myself of my incessant need for adjectives and adverbs, lol. I’ll definitely cut those two out–thanks! :)

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