Comments on: Teaser–The Demon Guard http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/ Finding Time to Write with 3 Dogs, 2 Kids & an ADHD Husband. Thu, 02 Feb 2012 16:48:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Hilary Wagner http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1106 Hilary Wagner Fri, 24 Jul 2009 20:51:31 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1106 Hound, I knew we were kindred spirits right away and now that your teaser and my teaser for this week both have someone being kicked in them, I know we are of the same mind!! You are really good with YA dialogue. This was cute, sweet and funny!! Bravo on the last line, pun totally intended! Great stuff!!!! ;) xoxo -- Hilary Hound,

I knew we were kindred spirits right away and now that your teaser and my teaser for this week both have someone being kicked in them, I know we are of the same mind!! You are really good with YA dialogue. This was cute, sweet and funny!! Bravo on the last line, pun totally intended! Great stuff!!!! ;)

xoxo — Hilary

]]> By: Sarah http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1104 Sarah Thu, 23 Jul 2009 18:38:41 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1104 BWA!! Lovelovelove it. Funny and fast - I envy that. Beautifully done! BWA!! Lovelovelove it. Funny and fast – I envy that. Beautifully done!

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1101 houndrat Wed, 22 Jul 2009 20:52:03 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1101 OMG--Marissa, that is so funny! I think it was a casuality of a last minute frantic edit, since this was so rough. Yes, I will definitely tweak that in revisions--YIKES! :) OMG–Marissa, that is so funny! I think it was a casuality of a last minute frantic edit, since this was so rough. Yes, I will definitely tweak that in revisions–YIKES! :)

]]> By: Marissa http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1100 Marissa Wed, 22 Jul 2009 20:37:50 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1100 Love the last line. Very fun scene! I could totally see the awkwardness of the kiss and you have some great one-liners in there (the fruity deoderant, etc.) Only thing: I need someone to -- crap. Totally caught me out of the moment. Good work! Love the last line.

Very fun scene! I could totally see the awkwardness of the kiss and you have some great one-liners in there (the fruity deoderant, etc.)

Only thing: I need someone to — crap. Totally caught me out of the moment.

Good work!

]]> By: houndrat http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1098 houndrat Tue, 21 Jul 2009 18:40:48 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1098 Thanks everyone! and Blond--yes! I was thinking that same thing, and plan to address it during revisions! :) Thanks everyone! and Blond–yes! I was thinking that same thing, and plan to address it during revisions! :)

]]> By: Gretchen http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1097 Gretchen Tue, 21 Jul 2009 18:15:18 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1097 "But you don't even like Bravo" is brilliant. Seriously brilliant. And like most of what you write, it sparkles. My only thought is that line where he outs himself was a little too pat. I've had several guys out themselves to me and it was significantly less matter of fact. “But you don’t even like Bravo” is brilliant. Seriously brilliant. And like most of what you write, it sparkles. My only thought is that line where he outs himself was a little too pat. I’ve had several guys out themselves to me and it was significantly less matter of fact.

]]> By: Tracey http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1096 Tracey Tue, 21 Jul 2009 16:39:37 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1096 lol! This book sounds like it's going to be so much fun. lol! This book sounds like it’s going to be so much fun.

]]> By: justme http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1095 justme Tue, 21 Jul 2009 16:26:48 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1095 And I'm not so good with grammar. Meant to say you're. And I’m not so good with grammar. Meant to say you’re.

]]> By: justme http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1094 justme Tue, 21 Jul 2009 16:25:47 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1094 LMAO. So funny. Your great with dialogue. LMAO. So funny. Your great with dialogue.

]]> By: Bryn Greenwood http://www.houndrat.com/2009/07/14/teaser-the-demon-guard/comment-page-1/#comment-1093 Bryn Greenwood Tue, 21 Jul 2009 16:20:34 +0000 http://www.houndrat.com/?p=193#comment-1093 Oh, this is a LOT of fun. I assume I'm missing some key joke by not knowing what "Bravo TV" is, but the rest is delightful. Oh, this is a LOT of fun. I assume I’m missing some key joke by not knowing what “Bravo TV” is, but the rest is delightful.

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