Comments on: Finally–another Teaser Tuesday

By: Heidi

Heidi — Fri, 26 Jun 2009 05:55:51 +0000

Wowza! I too did not see that coming. You are good!

By: Stephanie

Stephanie — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 04:31:07 +0000

Must have more! That was awesome–I’m very intruiged. Great job!

By: Jan (hope101)

Jan (hope101) — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 04:19:15 +0000

I love your voice. Such humor. And then–bam!–what an end. Good job, hound. If this is what you write like rough, you ain’t never seein’ my pages.

By: ChristaCarol

ChristaCarol — Wed, 24 Jun 2009 04:16:51 +0000

Wow, the ending really gets you. The voices is great. Love how nervous she is. Especially things like “my flirting skills were way beyond rusty” lol. Good job!

By: Tracey

Tracey — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 23:29:32 +0000

Fantastic set up that delivers perfectly! Loved this!

By: Grayrose

Grayrose — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 23:01:29 +0000

Very nicely done!

By: sunna

sunna — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 21:45:33 +0000

Totally love the ending! Such fabulous set-up, well-paced and snappy. *applauds*

By: Jy'lenn

Jy'lenn — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 20:44:31 +0000

OMG!!! LOVE it!!! Especially the ending!

heh… he obviously never saw that one coming! Lol!!!!

By: justme

justme — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 20:43:34 +0000

Well, I didn’t see that coming. LOL. Good job!

By: firedrake

firedrake — Tue, 23 Jun 2009 20:39:21 +0000

oooerrr!!!!

Talk about leaving us hanging! Loved that ending!
Very clever scene.